cool, i like the way you did the trees
left side of comp could use more points of interest in that its just empty path compared to two figures
some solutions could be brining in fog more, textureing the ground, adding more plants, or creating spots of sunlight on ground

interesting color choices for trees but looks pretty cool (=

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piece seems kinda flat and very unfinished esp the boy.

All the trees are strait so it doesn't give off that creepy forest vibe.

Contrast / values are off. It almost seems like their foot is unfinished or cut off rather then comming out of frame.

perspective of the flower is off. There are better ways to show that light is emminating from the flower rather then just show it in flat perspective and towards the audience.

Theres no light reflection off the flower source light. The face should be a bit more illuminated.

Too many light sources in the drawing. You only need 2. The light from the forest background and the plant.

Lack of warm and cool colors making it look saturated. The background and the floor is the same tone as the characters in the foreground (which makes it blend in). Try making the floors a mixture of either yellow, green and orange or add foliage to offset all the saturation.

You need to add some body definition in the characters. The kid looks like he has a cylinder for a body rather then mid parts.

The boy should also be a bit darker since hes not affected by the source light as much as the girl. Also u forgot shadows.

I have tons more to say but I dont wanna deter you from being distraught D:

I hope this helps! Good luck!

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i like it overall but the people are a bit stiff looking, and also i would add more of those little details on the other trees, you have them ona couple of them but i think it would look better with all of them so the 2 didnt look so off. really liking the color scheme though

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wow, thank you so much! I will try all that. Yeah, the boy is unfinished, he was the last thing I did and I really loathed the whole piece by then.

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Those are good ideas! I'll get to them as soon as I can. Thank you!

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That's true, I'll do that.

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if you need help with it, I can give you demos and resend it to you.

Just contact me on msn (u should already have it) or AIM.

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WOW! Jess this is really awsome! It's hard to find original art!